Very Cool. :)
That's a nice piece of loop you got here. And here I can imagine myself in some kind of pirateship and the storm just comes to terrify it by all means and stuff. :]
But there's a little flaw that annoys me a little, not big though. It's that when you introduce the high pitch string at 0:16, then I think that the whole loop could keep going for a sequence more, with that high pitch being like it is here.
But still a very nice loop overall. :) Great job!
8/10 - 4/5
- ThePal