ThePal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Your Beauty]

Very nice. :)

I like, well... everything in this song. :D The saw that comes in at 0:12 really put in a nice trance/techno feel. And i like the reverb to. Overall. Amazing song. But i little to short.

Btw, sorry to hear the girlfreind thing. :(

ElectroLord99 responds:

it'll be ok sometime in the future, maybe i'll come back to this song and remake it to sound much better :) i didnt put any effort into this cuz i just felt way too broken to do anything right.
thanks for the kind feelings :)

[The Conjurer]

Great job,

I would say that the arabic synth at the start kinda keeps on for too long, And that the song should've stopped at 4:27. But it still sounds great and yes, it got this tripping feeling to it. But not much. (in my opinion)

aryst0krat responds:

Do you mean the very first synth or the one that's sort of 'wah'ish? Because if you mean the first one, I would agree. And I would agree on the stopping of the song too, but my partner did this song with no input from me, so yeah :P

Maybe we'll remake it sometime to fix these little issues.

Thanks for the review!

[Dream Vietnam]

Nice!

I like the solo-like music idea. Which fit very nice. But later in the song, it gets kinda empty, Not much, but there's a need of something new from the other melodies.
Overall, cool melodies, but with lack of atmosphere later on. nice. :)

DogLegPilot responds:

Hiya, Pal! Yeah, it ends up sounding like one giant outro. We should have kept the melody going or varied it. I appreciate the review.

[Desert Beuaty]

Amazing...

It got a very very interesting rythem path, and that's what makes me think this as a great song. It's very original, and i love that. It got the right length too.

The only thing that takes it down is the lack of interesting effects, people love that. :P
Simply amazing... Keep it up!

samuraiomi responds:

Thnx for the feedback. I will keep in mind using more interesting effects. sounds fun :)

[Cave Story War (Cave Story Remix)]

This sir,

is awesome. I've always loved this kind of music. Amazing dude, amazing.

rtnario responds:

Awesome, thanks! And if you're sure about you loving this kind of music, you just might want to check out my collection. This is not the first of its kind :)

~rtnario

[Imminent Ignition]

Nice, but...

It's some kinda desent sounds, you could find better. And the guitar thing gets totally out off rythem at 1:16. There could be some improvements. But just keep trying. :)

Syniphas responds:

Actually, I see your point, but the guitar doesn't change at all through the entire song, only the lead gets some effects applied to, and I added another drum machine and bass, but yeah, the guitar sounds a little off with all that.

[Rockin In The Psytrance]

There could be lots of improvements.

You really should make some fill-ins and fade-outs or bridges or stuff. And it like it's randomized, (first some bass, then instantly, a guitar.) You really should put in effects in to. There really could be some improvements you have to think about.
But hey, nice try. :)

JPLaro responds:

this is random stuff trown out

[Day of Judgement]

Nice,

Pretty neat melodies and stuff. The whistle that starts at 0:10 kinda hurts in my ears. That almost the only thing that hurts the song.

Tigerfrog responds:

On my speakers this instrument almost sounded too loud and piercing, but then again I also wanted it to stand out, so I let it slide.

[The Parking Lot]

Relaxing...

Just what i needed after stressing day...
I like it, but it's still kinda repettive, not much, but it almost the same melody all the way though. But nothing to worry about i think. :)

alnajuum responds:

Sitting in the car is definitely kinda repetitive :)

[.'. Illumination .'.]

Good stuff again!

Some of the synths got to low in volume at some parts. I don't know, there's just some points where it gets to many effects. I actully think you overworked on this one. But still a great job! Keep it up!

Philosophadam responds:

Thanks; that's fair enough. It's definitely an effects-intensive track. I'm working on a new song called "Remembrance" that I think finds a better balance between musical structure and transitional effects. :)