Nicely done, but with flaws.
I must say that this is a nice piece of work you got here, but I can see the flaws in it too.
I like the fact you've put delays in, almost always makes a nice feel. But for example at 0:07 and 0:20 it gets to annoying in some way. It should be fixed in some way or another.
Also the part at 1:26, I'd say that the guitar comes in too fast and at a too high volume. It'll sound nice if it could fade-in a little since it's so constant and loud. Maybe with some much reverb or something.
I really like the part at 1:32 where it begins to build up, really puts in a feeling in this.
But at 1:46 it goes too high, I don't think that the volume should be this high at this part. Gave me a shock at the first time.
At 2:29 the guitar comes in again, I don't really think that it fits too nice into this, it's like it's 2 totally different sounds that contradicts each other.
It's nice, but I think it could use some more work.
7/10 - 4/5
- ThePal