ThePal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Second Chance]

That's just beautiful!

Amazing. Truly amazing. You amost had me falling asleep in one hearing.
I really hope that you'll keep this up. :)
5/5 - 10/10

-ThePal

[Yuletide suite]

Nicely done!

I like what you did here. :)
Especially now here around the holiday. :D

Really puts you into the the chrismas spirit. ^^
Nicely done. :3

[The Wind Fish's Ballad]

Me likes,

But it also got some issues which in I think makes it quite annoying. No offence. Like the main chime which comes in at each beat. That should be volumed down to a proper level. It quite hurts in my ears.
But i like the general mood in this song. It's nice. :3
Good job but a little annoying.
7/10 - 3/5
- ThePal

GamekrazzyProduction responds:

lol, yeah... good point... glad you lake pal. Thanks for reviewing!!!

[A Sad Tale]

Nice. :3

Very nicely done overall, just too sad there's no effect at some parts. :/ It could sound juat amazing with some effects on like a long decay reverb to the piano and guitar. Maybe a little tip and delay too.
But overall. I enjoyed listening to this. :)
4/5 - 8/10
- ThePal

GamekrazzyProduction responds:

yeah. You really like reverb don't you? lol. Im glad you liked it... ^_^

[I'm Broken...]

Nicely done, but with flaws.

I must say that this is a nice piece of work you got here, but I can see the flaws in it too.
I like the fact you've put delays in, almost always makes a nice feel. But for example at 0:07 and 0:20 it gets to annoying in some way. It should be fixed in some way or another.
Also the part at 1:26, I'd say that the guitar comes in too fast and at a too high volume. It'll sound nice if it could fade-in a little since it's so constant and loud. Maybe with some much reverb or something.
I really like the part at 1:32 where it begins to build up, really puts in a feeling in this.
But at 1:46 it goes too high, I don't think that the volume should be this high at this part. Gave me a shock at the first time.
At 2:29 the guitar comes in again, I don't really think that it fits too nice into this, it's like it's 2 totally different sounds that contradicts each other.
It's nice, but I think it could use some more work.
7/10 - 4/5
- ThePal

GamekrazzyProduction responds:

cRAVE01 thought the same about 1:26, so thats a definite fix. I do plan on working a little on 2:29 too. So thanks. Thanks for the review pal.

[There Is a Storm Brewing]

Very Cool. :)

That's a nice piece of loop you got here. And here I can imagine myself in some kind of pirateship and the storm just comes to terrify it by all means and stuff. :]
But there's a little flaw that annoys me a little, not big though. It's that when you introduce the high pitch string at 0:16, then I think that the whole loop could keep going for a sequence more, with that high pitch being like it is here.
But still a very nice loop overall. :) Great job!
8/10 - 4/5

- ThePal

[Walk Through This Jungle]

Very cool. :)

You've got a nice song here. And I'm gonna say both the good and bad points which I have in my opinion.

Good stuff: You really manage to get an awesome feeling into the song! I really love it! I also liked the sounds/synths you've chosen for this. Very cool.

Bad stuff: When your main synth goes into the deep gnarlyness, I think it goes a little to far into this, i think that it still should hold the same pitch all the way through that. The gnarly would still fit awesome into the track, but it'll sound better if it could hold the pitch if you know what mean.

Great job in doing this. Very nice! Keep it up! :D
4/5 - 7/10

- ThePal

treyhaur responds:

I guess you're talking about the part around the 2 minute mark where it almost turns to dissonance. The idea was that this part would overpower everything else in the mix and then fade out (the song dissolves into static). Obviously it didn't work out like I hoped. :(

Anyway, I'll work on it some more when I get another opportunity.
Thanks for the review!

[Mysterical (remake)]

Nice. :)

I checked the pm and the song before this. Even though I almost like the original better because of it's simplicy. But nice try anyway. :) I like the way you use the presets nice and simple still. You should really keep on trying using FL Studio. :D I use it myself. :)
4/5 - 10/10

- ThePal

GamekrazzyProduction responds:

cool, and thanks for checking it out.

[A Breath of Sorrow]

Amazing. I...

...become so calm and relaxed when I hear this piece of wonder. Amazing, I must admit. I really love the way it continues to be interesting and nice to listen to, even though it's almost the same rhythm all time though. And the drums also really puts in a amazing feeling into this. Keep on going. I'm downloading this.

10/10 - 5/5.

- ThePal

AdventureBiscuit responds:

I'm glad you like it, man :3

I'm also glad it kept your interest even though it's friggin' long. I was worried it would be too repetitive for people to listen to.

Thankyou very much for the review, and the awesome score! :D

[Witches Cauldron]

Very nice!

I most say that it's amazing it that way that you can imagine yourself in a videogame like zelda or something in that way in a magic shop or something related. And the simplicy actully makes it sound better. :D
Amazing job in this. Keep going!

9/10 - 5/5

- ThePal

phatham responds:

Thank you lots! :D