ThePal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flutterwonder [Acoustic Cover]]

The guitar sounds crispy and clear, point up there. :)

Like Seprix said, I'd wish the lyrics would be more clear, but I myself don't know how to master those yet. Search it up somewhere on the web, I should do the same. :)

The flute is incredible, I love it, ONE MORE!

The "aaaah" at 1:44, it's alittle sad that it's autotuned, but oh well. :)

Also, the voice getting put over at 2:29 is too loud in comparison to the rest of the mix, you should (as said before) find a way to master this so it fit with the rest or leave it out, in my opinion.

Everything said is me trying on constructive critism, I'm sorry if I pushed some bad buttons. :)

NyxTheShield responds:

Nah dude that what are reviews for dont worry hahahahaha

1:44 clips were touched a bit with melodyne (like everything) but nothing big, it still sounds pretty good (what i had to do is move the different clips up and down, i only recorded the C note Hahahahaha) https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/93823550/Do.wav

Thanks for the feedback ^^

[Sporadic]

Another great track from you!

Amazing progressive journey right there. o/

[Temperance]

I didn't know you were on Newgrounds, nice to see you here as well! :D

I love the 2:20 part, very calming and progressing.
I quite like the shredding gnarly synths you throw around as well. :)

There's a nice balance between hard and soft parts, and it does wonders, surely!

Keep up the great work, my friend! o/

-ThePal

Phantasma000 responds:

Thanks man!

[Glorious]

Very epic, very dramatic, quite as I like it!

Hope you'll get places with this sometime. :D

- ThePal

[Impulsive Persuasion]

Fine piece you've made here!

I feel like the added instrument at 0:05 doesn't really fit in with the whole piece, I would consider another intrument/sample/FX to fit in instead.

Sure is interesting, keep up the good work! :)

-ThePal

[VS Marimba Demo]

Sounds marvelous! You did some great scores, was a sure wonder to listen to. :)

Thanks for the link, btw! o/

Jiimaan responds:

I'm very glad you liked it!

Thank you for taking the time to review! :)

-jiimaan

[AxEL - Rise of the Machine]

Very interesting piece! There's some nice gnarly synths inbetween, do like. o/

[De4dl0ck - Resistance]

Very simple, quite straight to the point. :)

Classic synths and choice of instruments, but I bet that's just your style. ;)

In my opinion, the deep saw bass in the beginning could've been changed into something else with more feeling, this one seems alittle plain, not a huge concern though.

Keep it up! ;)

[River Flows In You-Remix]

I am blown away. Really.

This is just amazing, you've seriously made an amazing job doing this. You might even begin to surpass the skill of my own!

I normally don't like Hardstyle (and you know that too well. ;P), but you've made an amazing mix of the piano and Hardstyle classic kicks at the 2:00 part, it just fits so well. Great fricking job right there!

This is my personal favourite from you so far, you're really becoming something the more and more you fight for your cause and everything!

Keep up the amazing work, man!
- ThePal

De4dl0ck responds:

Awesome review my friend :)

[Something Special?]

I like the rhythms in this piece. The Subbass and background pads give a nice atmosphere. It also has a nice beat to cover it up.
Too sad that it's default samples. That takes it down a notch.

Anyways,
There's potential in this, keep on going!

NoStereo responds:

I feel ashamed I used the default samples now ): I've looked around and have found some really nice sounding ones! I'm doing a lot of work to improve this song and I am almost done!

Thanks for the review! :)