ThePal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blue Light]

this is super chill. ✨

floorboardofficial responds:

Thanks!

[Visual Snow]

I love that guitar riff from the start! The vocals sounds great,
the bass coming up after that hits like a dream, well done!

floorboardofficial responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm definitely glad to hear that the bass had the desired effect on you.

[No Boundaries]

0:00 - intro is chill and clear, sets the mood nice.
0:18 - personally, I believe some mellow synths to go in harmony with the synth stabs here would do wonders.
0:36 - boom. that's a transition if I've ever heard a good one. this section is filled with leads and harmonics in different synths and a rhythm that gets your head bopping. A little more in the bass section to ground it more would make it top-notch.
1:14 - nice use of sidechain here, good mood/build-up.
1:31 - watch out to not have too many things going at once, regardless of how great they sound together. I hear the reverb smearing over the rest of the mix a bit too much here, in my opinion.

too many things will smear it all together, and makes the listener unsure what to focus on.
right here, it's 𝘢𝘭𝘮𝘰𝘴𝘵 an issue, either equalize it a little better, lower the reverb or consider removing something to make the rest stand out a bit more.
2:08 - almost a bit too little going on here, add a little sprinkle of something harmonic somewhere in the high mids of the EQ and you're golden.
2:23 - 𝘺𝘦𝘴.
2:26 - same as 1:31
3:03 - playing a muffled down bassline here slowly fading out with the lead would ground this nice outro a bit better, too bad that it stops abruptly like that as well.

take everything written with a grain of salt, they're merely suggestions on how to improve it.
it sounds great as is, keep up the great work. 👊

Ditchy responds:

Happy with it all mate. Thank you.

[My Dear, Noël]

This is absolutely grand, and executed with lots of passion, I can just hear it. ✨

You've definitely earned yourself a follower, and I hope to hear from you again soon. ^^

[Lightshift - Menu]

This is absolutely epic and atmospheric. Well done!

[Gonna Drop]

This is pretty rad, well done!

[ElToshiro - Grafiti]

Cosy and chill beats, could definitely think of some chill rap on top of this

[Albe albeit]

Pretty vibrant and nice chord structure, really like the change at 2:39, very nostalgic and trippy

[Weird]

You got lots of variance going, I like what I'm hearing! Keep it up! :D

[These Days Are All The Same]

mashing chords doing a loop-de-loop, I like it. o/